Monday, November 20, 2017

A Prick Of Conscience Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the pen of the abused sad child I present this to u

I curse the day I was bored,
A greater curse be this day
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Alexandrian Ink
COMMENTS
Hassan Hayati 16 December 2017

Your poem is a loud yell, although your mouth is closed. congratulations for being chosen as the poem of the day.

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Sy Wong 15 December 2017

A sad poem to read..emotional.

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Lyn Paul 15 December 2017

Please be proud of this write! A tragic yet common story. Finally these stories are now being heard with people being punished for abusing others. Though this, it still will not take away the pain and the lifelessness lost of so many. Thank you so much. I wish you happiness.

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Savita Tyagi 15 December 2017

Speechless! Let your words wake humanity up to wipe a child’s tears.

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Richard Wlodarski 15 December 2017

It took a great deal of courage to write this heart-wrenching poem. And you did it with a lot of class. I commend you for both your courage and your excellence in writing. Oduma, A Hearty Congratulations on Poem Of The Day! Greatly deserved!

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Susan Williams 15 December 2017

Hurts deep to read this knowing a child is being violated somewhere every day in probably every country. A needed Poem of the Day.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 December 2017

This pain! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 15 December 2017

One of the saddest events that occur in this planet, felt so perturbed at its reading. Thanks poet for the sharing. A poem worth being picked POD. Subhas

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James Mclain 15 December 2017

It is a rare writer who confesses other's sins and leaves a mark upon the Soul's of those who know but won't speak or leaves their mark.. James McLain

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 December 2017

This is really a heart wrenching drop. All over the world children are abused and their lives are destroyed. A very sad reality and wish this poem will send a strong message. Deserved to be poem of the day.

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Bill Cantrell 15 December 2017

The scars never heal, a childs life should be a time of joy and love, but the sober truth is this is a cruel world with cruel people, time does not heal all wounds, it took courage to write this poem my friend, this is so deserving as poem of the day, yes every inhabitant of earth should hear this poem, especially those who are responsible for hurting others

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Bharati Nayak 15 December 2017

Extremely sad story of an abused child, so powerfully expressed.Children are more vulnerable to abuse.Your poem speaks for the silenced voice.Thank you for sharing.

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Tom Allport 15 December 2017

a very very sad reality poem of evil that slithers and charms it's way into many lives everyday? ................well written Oduma

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 15 December 2017

Very touching indeed and i wonder and also it grieves me going through this piece how a child has been abused by him since the day of her birth........so painfully expressed with touching words and lines deserves P.O.D...........10+++++++ thanks for sharing by him since the day of her birth........so painfully expressed with touching words and lines deserves P.O.D...........

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 December 2017

Oduma, such a brilliant write. Congrats for being chosen. A perfect 10+++

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