Friday, March 6, 2009

A Prick In The Petal Comments

Rating: 5.0

So soft the petal is
who pricked its breast?
so saintly a chest
reaped with lovely harvest
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lalitha iyer
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Wonderfully written. Enjoyed the read. D

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 April 2010

like these lines: some hearts are softer than the smooths of silky woven cloths hurt are their tenders when a word a hunter renders I can feel the pain as if it rains thank u for ur poetic mind. tony

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