One day,
On my way,
I went to meet my granddaughter
and spend the day with her.
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Your each and every word is really touching in this poem. How you spent the priceless day with your granddaughter was really awesome and beautiful. Your have an inner eyes to observe everything that's why we poets always feel delighted. I wish everyone could be a poet like you.
I know exactly how you feel about spending time with your granddaughter. I recently spent the day with mine, taking her school shopping. I treasure these moments with my little angel. Nice poem that many can relate to. Best Wishes, Marilyn
Children are angelic hearts from heaven their minds so innocent they can give happiness in abundance.. Priceless day is a precious gift to readers... pleasant one with so much love. Rema
Those sudden unexpected joys make our lives rich. Priceless piece of poetry. why I missed ur poems so far? I wonder! sathya narayana
Hello Mamta. Thank God for the wionderful rich memories and the precious times with our children. Pleasant read. Loyd
A deep feeling Free-thinking Simply enjoying That makes us innocent Just like a child. There comes the joy With all its purity Priceless Of course... Enjoyed the sense of Joy in this poem. Thank you.
written in simple and attractive diction..remonds me of wordsworth's Prelude' small children make us feel a second childhood...I liked reading it.
..reading this poem I am touched by a sacred love feeling! Ammmmmazing no doubt and...............+++++++10