Monday, September 11, 2006

A Pretty Something Comments

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I only loved the idea of you
A pretty something
But you were just you
I should have seen it coming
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Marijke McKinney
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Hedy Hafen 14 March 2018

Love this poem and the clever words..right on point.

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Delilah Miller 12 March 2007

Okay, I would leave a comment but this poem is amazing and you must have known it when you wrote it. It's so true to life, and lays out the flaw of perfection so well! Xs and Os

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Kee Thampi 20 September 2006

Scraping paint off the walls You were all white underneath Covered with colors from my eyes A perfect painting of mine I love the way you write in lovable verse....free to mind and heart

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Ashleigh Gaffney 11 September 2006

marijke youre amazing<3

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