Friday, October 3, 2008

A Present For The Demon Asmodeus On Halloween Comments

Rating: 2.9

A present for Asmodeus(the prince of demons) on Halloween


A person with a look that’s proud
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JAMES ROBERTS
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 May 2020

They must also have heart that cruel and be wicked wise. Halloween is celebrated to drag out the devil. This poem is very brilliantly and excellently penned.

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Fay Slimm 08 October 2008

Would not know who you might have in mind in this piece Jim - but could be the politicians or at least some of them.... they have cunning smiles, beckon with their fingers and sometimes their hearts plot mischief! ! You see I checked Proverbs 6 like you suggested! Good poem Jim and a mystery to boot - I liked it. A 10+ from me.

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Lynda Robson 03 October 2008

A very dark piece ready for Halloween, I like the last stanza, made me laugh 10 Lynda xx

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