Monday, November 17, 2014

A Preplaned X-Mas Prayer Comments

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My Lord! Kill me and send me back,
I don't ask for a very big pack,
Just two wings as I want to fly,
For descending back from the sky,
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 October 2018

X MASis yet far away for a lovelier autumn today pray you may and ask O lord let the beauty abound all 12 months around let the cyclic wave for ever last I am just one small subject of yours at last god be with me fast....great hope ur GOD has ears or he I suppose already knows what lies in your mind O POET SO GREAT

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 October 2018

X MASis yet far away for a lovelier autumn today pray you may and ask O lord let the beauty abound all 12 months around let the cyclic wave for ever last I am just one small suject of yours at last god be with me fast

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 October 2018

great hope ur GOD has ears or he I suppose already knows what lies in your mind O POET SO GREAT JA

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Umar Hashmi 01 December 2015

A nice prayer........................................................

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Hazel Durham 16 March 2015

Creative, spellbinding write with a powerful message!

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Salini Nair 18 November 2014

see destruction in my old helpless palm, Through the ashes of destruction, Spring new flowers of construction, .............................same prayer for universal peace....nice

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Khalida Bano Ali 17 November 2014

An universal message, I welcome this lovely poem.

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Valsa George 17 November 2014

'So give two wings and a nib to the dove, And a heart filled in with love only love! .'............ This is all we can ask for from God the Almighty! In a strife ridden world let us act as the doves of peace and spread the message of love! Enjoyed!

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