A Preliminary Summer Song Comments

........a very good poem indeed Sameer.You have a bright future as a poet.Go ahead friend..keep reaching out to the minds...

loved it! ..words..skipping, bouncing in great joy..life on a summer day sounds quite nice anywhere it seems.. :) tom

it fairly sings off the page! 'In comes summer' is a great repeating line, then bright happy images strung together like beads on a chain. the dancing makes for such a lively ending too!

Luminous imagery. I like the bright picture you have painted. Thank you for sharing your summer world with me.10 without hesitation. Kind regards, Sandra

If only this peaceful existance could prevail - what a beautiful and happy write, made me smile Sameer Ahmed - thank you

Very true.The whole poem is full of reality in pakistani climate.Well done dear Ayya Aapi

Very nice, up beat; I could all most be in the mist of it all.T

I can feel the heat and hear the laughter of children. Thanx for sharing+10