Thursday, December 4, 2008

A Pregnant Pause Comments

Rating: 3.2

A silence
Pregnant with suspense
Peeping through your eyes
My mind
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Rachel Butler 04 November 2009

'My heart Flushes with rosy splendor' Rachel Ann Butler

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Jihad T 17 January 2009

i guess i'm gonna close my eyes and add 10 to all your poem god bless you

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C. P. Sharma 13 December 2008

Nightingale, abort the twins and nourish the rosy splendor in heart, the child of bliss. Wow, an ecstacy of poetry! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! CP

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Vinod Kumar 06 December 2008

Writing in brief is very difficult, excellent narration Shukran

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Indira Babbellapati 06 December 2008

never heard a nightingale sing...but the song of the persian nightingale even while at pause.is soul stirring!

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Reshma Ramesh 06 December 2008

beautiful...............

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Osayamen Evbuomwan 05 December 2008

I liked it very well thought out *kudos*

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Wonderful poem I like it a lot nice wording... ~Krista~

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Very beautiful Poem Thanks for sharing -Brie

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Elizabeth Mpanga 04 December 2008

really pregnant poem. lol nice

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Linda Winchell 04 December 2008

Congrats! God Bless and what a nice piece written for you children to one day read. Ten! Linda

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Many thoughts and congratulations on the 'twins'.Another ten from me.

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Ramesh T A 04 December 2008

Indeed a pregnant pause is due to twins!

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Anjali Sinha 04 December 2008

wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! I have a pregnant smile remembering something just recollect -10 regards anjali (read mine TELEPATHY)

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Sandra Fowler 04 December 2008

Very original title and the content of your poem does not disappoint. You say little to say much.10 for you. Kind regards, Sandra

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Sarwar Chowdhury 04 December 2008

wow! nice imagery! .......10++++

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Min Sia 04 December 2008

Lovely..truly..imaginative..full of imagery..and very captivating... Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem!

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Raj Nandy 04 December 2008

May this pause get converted into happy reality! -Raj

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Sallie Howson 04 December 2008

beautiful and sweet...........

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Fiona Davidson 04 December 2008

What a lovely poem...twins are so precious aren't they...thank you...Fi

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