Wednesday, July 6, 2016

A Predicament Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just like a blooming flower that opens up to the dawn
Just like a bird that sings in the morn
Just like the floating full-moon that is into the night sky born
Just like an oasis in a vast desert forlorn
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Rajesh Thankappan
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Mihaela Pirjol 19 July 2016

Wow! A great composition! You have enumerated both: the positive, and the negative aspects of love masterfully!

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Rajnish Manga 07 July 2016

The poem is divided into two parts. First one consists of a breath-taking collage of nature's landscape while part two presents the harsh realities gathered through our journey with which we reach the Almighty's abode in the end. Thanks for such a wonderful poem, Rajesh ji.

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Don't be so self-conscious Rajesh-ji. Just leap - she is waiting with arms outstretched. You would be as happy as the full moon sailing in the placid sky. (10)

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