Wednesday, December 18, 2019

A Prayer To Mahi (Goddess Of Vastness) Comments

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Sunset spreads its wings upon my time
O Poetry! I haven't learned your rhyme.

To you, O Mahi! I offer my voice,
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....Let your grace fall to create a little jibe Upon my ignorant being, to catch a vibe. A sincere prayer from the heart of a poet on whom 'Sunset spreads its wings upon my time'

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 December 2019

A great imagery of sunset is captured with beauty of divinity of Goddess of Vastness. Goddess Saraswati blesses us to give us purity and beauty of education, learning and perception. Sweetness comes through rhyming. A great poem of devotion is beautifully penned ahead of Saraswati Puja. She is also known as Goddess Sharada. An excellent poem is beautifully penned.10

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