Hails to thee, Lord!
In your praise we offered a thousand oblations
broke a hundred coconuts, and offered prayers
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Beautiful. Excellent. We need no more. A masterpiece. A brilliant write.
An intese preaching thru the poem and I cherish the truth of our short commings nice to read all we want is in nature and then only a pray...regards
Very good poem Sir and I welcome you to my page too
We always beg before 'GOD' like a 'DOG'. Perhaps we have forgotten that we are human beings. Time has come to live like a 'HUMAN'! A Superb revolutionary poem! Deserve billions of Kudos, Thank You Sir. Warm Regards, Suman
our stomach is full, not even with food or with the unavailable clean water..
A very intense write full of emotions and petitions. A well crafted poem with much details. Thanks.
mandirs and mosques It must be either Temples and mosques or Mandirs and Masjids. That could sound much better. By the way nice effort. Thanks.