Sunday, August 25, 2013

A Prayer To God Comments

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        Hails to thee, Lord!

In your praise we offered a thousand oblations
broke a hundred coconuts, and offered prayers
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Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan
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V P Mahur 14 April 2014

mandirs and mosques It must be either Temples and mosques or Mandirs and Masjids. That could sound much better. By the way nice effort. Thanks.

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Ramesh Rai 21 February 2014

Beautiful. Excellent. We need no more. A masterpiece. A brilliant write.

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Ken E Hall 24 January 2014

An intese preaching thru the poem and I cherish the truth of our short commings nice to read all we want is in nature and then only a pray...regards

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Babatunde Aremu 11 December 2013

Amen] This is lucidly written. Kudos

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Very good poem Sir and I welcome you to my page too

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Suman Kumar Das 10 November 2013

We always beg before 'GOD' like a 'DOG'. Perhaps we have forgotten that we are human beings. Time has come to live like a 'HUMAN'! A Superb revolutionary poem! Deserve billions of Kudos, Thank You Sir. Warm Regards, Suman

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 06 September 2013

our stomach is full, not even with food or with the unavailable clean water..

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Patricia Grantham 05 September 2013

A very intense write full of emotions and petitions. A well crafted poem with much details. Thanks.

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Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan

Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan

Bhubaneswar, Odisha, India
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