A Prayer Of Proclamation.... Comments

Sir Geoff of The Word and The Way...A W E S O M E....P E N N I N G! Perhaps your very best work to date, my friend...So good to see you on my visit to Poemtown this friday evening...And i want to say: Thank You, for your recent reads & comments...a loyal & lifetime friend in true you be, indeed...I am trying to juggle business & this site...But, thus far...not so well...Been tossin' pieces onto the posting line here & there...but my heart & mind are no longer zoned in as they once were....Anyway...keep in touch, Oh Squire of Sacred Scriptings... ~ ~ ~

Sir Geoff of The Word and The Way...A W E S O M E....P E N N I N G! Perhaps your very best work to date, my friend...So good to see you on my visit to Poemtown this friday evening...And i want to say: Thank You, for your recent reads & comments...a loyal & lifetime friend in true you be, indeed...I am trying to juggle business & this site...But, thus far...not so well...Been tossin' pieces onto the posting line here & there...but my heart & mind are no longer zoned in as they once were....Anyway...keep in touch, Oh Squire of Sacred Scriptings... ~ ~ ~

Thank you for sharing the Prayer, the Blessings, the Poem.

What a wonderful prayer to write (I am sure) ...and to Read (makes the reader feel blessed) Thanx so much. It is always nice to read prayer but it becomes much better when you can be blessed by it...I feel your conviction and the happiness in your voice (Your written voice) and I will now go back and pray this prayer. Thank You Geoff for sharin.....10/ten. Take care of U =Shelley=

Here I was serving up grammatical guru revisions, forgetting all the while that my critique should have read.... an insertion instead. Oh, pshaw, tsk, tsk. Shame on me for six weeks! But no snow, this is truly a dandy corker. You, my most astute scribe, are poetically progressing along at a fast clip. Maintain your impressive and bodacious work. Your fellow Londoner, GWG

Its a wonderful prayer, talking to our almighty God.God bless you! Best regards, Mary

This might be better served if line 2 read with...'so many's the time' or ' so many is a time' when.... combined with line 12's correction of the singular open with a insertion of a period at the end of that sentence. Other than that, this is a beautiful offering. GWG

Definitely from the heart Geoff and here for all to see, a wonderful powerful prayer reaching out to the Holy Saviour and talking to him as we all should do. You have a wonderful realtionship going on with the Lord Geoff. Thanks for your support on this First Day of Worship here on Poemhunter.--Melvina--

Beautiful and heartfelt Geoff! The truth...the light...that of you! Wonderfully said!

Beautiful Geoff.Filled from the heart.

This is beautiful and soulful, Geoff. Perfect for a Sunday morning. You speak so eloquently those words that we all pray in our own hearts and souls. Thanks for sharing it so selflessly. Linda xx