Friday, August 21, 2009

A Prayer For The Dying Comments

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Carry me, soft and gentle
Into sleeps arms and beyond
Painless at last, embrace me
In whatever must follow on
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Fiona Davidson
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Joe Hughes 22 November 2021

Beautiful, fresh, uncliched and comforting. Just so calming. Thank you

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Alf Hutchison 09 November 2009

Fiona this write is so tenderly beautiful...if we all could pass on like this... regards Alf

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Tyrone Allen 27 September 2009

wow love this one. the sentence about the breath a new born take that was my favorite line

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Laurie Hill 02 September 2009

I like this very much...very moving with a feeling of calm....

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Matt Mooney 02 September 2009

Very moving poem beautifully written. I'll be reading more of your poems.

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Patrick A. Martin 31 August 2009

This is a special piece thank you for making death what it truely is.... beautiful

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Yelena M. 25 August 2009

'Let their wings curl around The ones I leave behind me Ease the loneliness they feel As I step brave into the night..' Moving, gentle and pure words..a beautiful prayer, Fiona.thanks for sharing. Yelena M.

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Meggie Gultiano 21 August 2009

this is a very comforting piece, and a nice prayer.I guess i will have to read this when my time comes..In HIS time. thanks, Fi.. Love, Meg

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Fay Slimm 21 August 2009

There could be no better words of prayer than these in your very moving piece Fi...tenderness and comfort come through in every line.... Fay.

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Sue Sie 21 August 2009

A powerful poem...that speaks volumes...Comforting words that you have such a talent for exspressing.... Sue x

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Carol Gall 21 August 2009

a beautiful prayer fi blessings

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