A Prayer For Deliverance Comments
You sat on the bed with a faraway look,
Aimlessly turning the pages of a book.
Silent tears flowing down your cheeks.
You have become all bones these last few weeks.
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Deftly painted with words.... it has all the emotions beautifully described
You have Madam the ability to establish a scene before the eyes of read, feel the sentiments, thoughts. Excellent rhyme scheme. touching 10 sathya narayana
Passion, and Poignancy to the 10th degree....A beautifuly sad work, that if based on your own life & experience(as, aside from my very rare dedicationals, none of MY work is based on my personal life) had to have been penned with much tearstain, and lament.A very moving piece of work, my friend. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..
For the deliverance To that soul - Who once prayed for our Birth Now we pray for the demise of same soul. An inevitable prayer … It teaches the – ‘Value of Loss’. Awfully touching...
A very touching and realistic picture…my grand father passed away in his nineties while both his sons before him in early fifties…so life is a dilemma…we can just pray for the deliverance of the old…..for it is difficult to see them in pain…I am always lost in thoughts while reading your poems….your are indeed a very realistic poet…
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8/14/2025 7:31:40 PM # 1.0.0
A very personal prayer so beautifully delivered....you are a really talented poetess Mamta - being able to make the reader actully feel every moment of your sorrow...