A Prayer For Change Comments

I know I've read this before...can't believe I didn't comment, except maybe it's all been said...very beautifully structured and wonderful theme...Coach

Linda, what can I say that hasn't been said before me. Such a gentle, but loving poem. Once started reading it I couldn't stop, you drew me in with beautiful words and wonderful message. I loved this. Thanks for sharing it. The only sad thing I took so long to discover it. David

Such a gentle, loving and caring philosophy underlies this lovely work. Linda you're still a Hippy at heart, and the dark world hasn't faded those ideals one jot. Takes me back to Wooden Ships and After The Goldrush, and beyond into the sixties, and some more recent Janis Ian - 'Guess You had to Be There'. And Rene Dubos's Only One Earth, Rachel Carson - Silent Spring, etc. Beautiful sentiments. You would be there when it all started to fall apart too: the Kent State killings etc. But the promise of the best of it lives on in these words. Lovely. Thank you. xx jim

Wonderful poem leaving the reader with a message of hope. Thanks for sharing

Great, interesting writing.

An excellent poem indeed, I enjoyed the read, a truly beautiful prayer. Thankyou Linda--Melvina--

Wonderful words, Linda. Warm and reassuring. Beautifully written. Impeccable style. May your prayer be answered! love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Great write. Loved it. I gave it a ten. God bless to all poets-Michael Jeffrey Gale.

LINDA...THY CUP O' DIVINE PRAISE HATH RUNNETH DRY WITH COLD DUST AND EMPTY-TOUNGE, FOR THOU DOTH LEAVE THINE OWN(big mouth) , WITH NERE' O' SINGLE SEED OF MEASURED HONOUR TO DUB THEE WITH, .........OTHER THAN....SUPERFANTASTICALISTIC WRITE! ! ! 10! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''