Sunday, September 11, 2011

A Prayer For A Loved One Comments

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Someone calls me and from where?
seems from afar and yet also near.
Hearing a voice as if from a silent zone,
dimming voices heard over a mobile phone.
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Renu Kakkar
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Renu Kakkar 26 September 2011

thank you...i wrote this for someone who is really ill and hope he recovers soon

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The 4am Poet Worm 20 September 2011

thats a beautiful poem...to be with anyone we have loved and lost again....10+

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Allemagne Roßmann 11 September 2011

Prayers are most occasions in for the good in human life..i dunno how much they work or how much it will individually work for me...though the mind do not titillate away from it when you have not 100 per cent control of all situations in my life... Well said and formidable poetry plot..

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Renu Kakkar

Renu Kakkar

Fazilka, punjab
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