A Prayer Comments

you painted me a picture, i could see you submitting your worries to the lord literally. the pain could be felt in your words, this is very powerful

A very submissive poem...well penned10

very well penned dear poet. the standard of poetry is well aplied...keep the legacy of the philosophy and descipline of poetry. ...the poem is a message of honesty- the acceptance of personal limitation, weakness, and emptiness. thanks.

deep, thought provoking. A spiritual catharsis! ! !