Friday, August 12, 2005

A Prayer Comments

Rating: 4.4

God will you help me just today.
I am confronted by a velvet skinned young maiden.
Or should I say presented with her by the grace of...YOU?
Her skin is softer than your own chamois
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mary Nagy 12 August 2005

Um.........well, it's a very good poem...no doubt about that. Very descriptive to say the least. Sincerely, Mary

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Herbert Nehrlich1 12 August 2005

Sorry to be so outspoken, says he who is fleetingly acquiring a bit of rouge.... H

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 12 August 2005

Very tastfully put Herbert....very sensual in every description. I enjoyed it!

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Uriah Hamilton 12 August 2005

H, this poem is too hot, you have a winner here.

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