A Prayer Comments

A very nice composition with a great message! I admire the thought conveyed that opens ones eyes to the significance of a disciplined life. Best wishes. I am a newcomer to this site. I just had a glance through your poems and found them interesting. In course of time I will take time to read and comment more on more of them. Meanwhile I would like you to know that I have pasted here a collection of my poems on the well known social worker late Baba Amte. I think you would be interested in knowing more about him and his work. I would like you to kindly go through some of them at your convenience, give your valuable comments and help me spread his universal message.

Your poem highlights very well the virtues and aims represented by Islamic Fasting...good write...and your post script too reads good...wisdom words...10