Help me hold on Lord,
Down on my knees,
Each day I sink lower,
Help me up, please,
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grievances made known to God...well written poem Vallerie... though the theme inside is grief...10
I can feel the sincerity of your sordid words, overflow in the desire they hold. blessings, arya
I am touched by your heartfelt prayer. I am sure that your words reached Heaven, for prayers have wings you know. Take care, my poet friend. Warmest regards, Sandra
Surely such a beautifully expressed prayer cannot go unanswered. Thank you for the poem.
faith in God is what we need most especially in our daily struggle in life! Well-penned!