Monday, March 17, 2008

A Prayer Comments

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Help me hold on Lord,
Down on my knees,
Each day I sink lower,
Help me up, please,
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Vallerie Lobell
son
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Marvin Brato 18 May 2012

faith in God is what we need most especially in our daily struggle in life! Well-penned!

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 28 July 2009

Amen, beautiful, thanks for sharing 10

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Kesav Easwaran 05 June 2009

grievances made known to God...well written poem Vallerie... though the theme inside is grief...10

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Egi David Perdana 09 October 2008

the ways to make people better is a praying

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Ron Flowers 19 August 2008

Very sad, very touching, very well written. Ron

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Colin Jeffery 02 August 2008

A very moving poem. Brilliant

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, aryaindia 27 July 2008

I can feel the sincerity of your sordid words, overflow in the desire they hold. blessings, arya

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Sandra Fowler 21 March 2008

I am touched by your heartfelt prayer. I am sure that your words reached Heaven, for prayers have wings you know. Take care, my poet friend. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Rani Turton 21 March 2008

Surely such a beautifully expressed prayer cannot go unanswered. Thank you for the poem.

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