Monday, October 31, 2016

A Prayer Comments

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God take me back into your flock,
Negativeness put on me a mental block.
Please help me to keep it in lock,
So that it cannot against me knock.
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Renu Kakkar
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Jaya Das 31 October 2016

Amazing lines penned here....loved the rhyming scheme...ty for sharing ur pen ma'am

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Renu Kakkar 31 October 2016

Thank you for liking the poem. I do meditation. This poem is in connection with a previous poem called ' Spiritual Being'. Today I was feeling a bit sad that I was not able to experience that vision again.

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Renu Kakkar

Renu Kakkar

Fazilka, punjab
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