A Prayer Comments

Oh what poignancy! ! This lamentation will definitely cut across the barriers of the earth and reach up to heaven! ! !

a wonderful prayer.....i read some of your poems and wud like 2 say tht they are all beautiful compositions and shall get back 2 read more...keep up the good work.....

very wonderful poem... soul story... heart massage.... very emotional with deep meaning and great rhythm. i like it very much... Look upon my affliction and my pain; And forgive all my sins. is the main truth of our life...

I love this one. Full of passion and despair, with thin glimmers of hope.

an excellent poem VIPINS i like ur use of old english mixed in with new

I like your prayer I wish that God likes it too in order for your sins to be washed away..

A prayer in trying times means so much..when you find no one worthy to be your own, it's a prayer to show the hope, provide much needed solace..pouring out your heart in words of a prayer is the best tribute one can pay to the Almighty, who always listens to his much loved children..Heart felt!

Hey, Vipins, I think this among the very best of your poems. Even though I like the romantic pieces of art you put up, this one I like even more: the poem is full of feeling and has such an important message of hope. I am thinking that far too many people see praying as a routine, they do to get some distant reward or magic help. If prayers, even in our darkest of moments, come truly from our heart, I think that is when they are really answered. I believe that our Creator is all around us just like water around a fish or like television waves around a television. It is just for us to tune in to the endless, limitless wisdom that is all around us and get proper guidance out of the deepest of valleys. We cannot affect our Creator, our Creator is ever willing to affect us in so many postive ways, if only we truly open up our mind and our soul for him. Fantastic poem, vipins. Keep writing more poems.

This prayer will really forgive the sins of the world. I remembered Tagore's God while reading this beautiful piece of art. Great write. Marks 10- Rekhamandagere

Very good, and deep from the heart crying out to the Lord... the One we should definately be crying out to.

Very very powerful poem. A great write.