A Pouring Broken Heart.... Comments

This is very beautifully written, Ankit. A broken heart, so unique and yet so common. Deep feelings of infatuation, enchantment Again so unique and yest so common. You are in my prayers, But when I pray for someone, Our God lets me know that it is done I pray for love We are all swimming in it We just have to open our hearts open our minds I pray for peace, We are swimming in it We just have to open our hearts to open our souls I pray for wisdom, We are swimming in it We just have to open To open our minds I pray for spirit We are swimming in it Let our self drown in the huge love the huge wisdom and spirit that is around us all time Sorry, my friend, your poem evoked so much of emotion I got a bit carried away in a flight of thoughts An excellent poem.