Monday, June 25, 2007

A Postcard From You Comments

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Years and years ago
There was a Me and You
First real love, First real heartbreak
Time healed a pain so sore
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Dean Simpson
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Not a member No 4 26 June 2007

Dean, This brings back an avalanche...... You wear your heart on your sleeve, and you wear it well. Honest, emotional writing that hit home hard here. If the first real love was good and you get it back, and what once was true still holds good... then the advice of forty years experience is quite simple and quite direct: love her always as if it's the last day of your life, and as Cia Frizzel on here has said: when you kiss her, kiss her as if it has to last a lifetime. Never any less. That's how important any real love is, but when it's first real love... the words.. well there are none that quite cover it. . Good poem mate. jim.

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