Wednesday, June 23, 2010

A Possible.....Goodbye? ? Comments

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If i were to leave and
never come back....
would anyone notice im gone? ?
my presence is fading
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Afzal Shauq 26 June 2010

A possible 'goodbye' is what ill say...is that a crime? ? because goodbyes are forever... hellos are for now since im not greeting you (all) im leaving you (all) .... as in my life....shall forever....be paused.... very poetic anger with sweet composition of words..i liked the way you expressed this poem..well done..10/10

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