Tuesday, November 10, 2020

A Positive Way Comments

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The sun bears welcome in the eye
beyond today your dreams lie
tomorrow shall be your day
so till the sun shines make hay
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Suryendu Chaudhury
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Khairul Ahsan 10 November 2020

'and what shall matter by the end of day your eyes lit up for that ray in the hope of something big or small that shall add to the benefit of all! ' - excellent words concluding a very positive poem.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 10 November 2020

Lovely. The poem flows like the suns rays. Am inspired to continue on and on and on

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