Monday, January 13, 2003

A Portrait Comments

Rating: 3.3

Because my love is quick to come and go-
A little here, and then a little there-
What use are any words of mine to swear
My heart is stubborn, and my spirit slow
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Dorothy Parker
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Chinedu Dike 04 March 2022

Quite a touching piece, heart felt and very passionate.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 March 2022

An admirable portrait...5 stars.

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Marieta Maglas 28 February 2018

What use are any words of mine to swear My heart is stubborn, and my spirit slow- beautifully written poem -voted 10

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Susan Williams 28 February 2018

I would give this a 10 rating but the voting booth appears closed...again. Sigh. Dorothy sounds a bit in need of encouragement today

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Susan Williams 28 February 2018

Gee, this is about as mellow as Dorothy Parker gets! Her acerbic tongue is half sheathed. I like her- she has a certain style with which she serves her bitters.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 February 2018

Here and there! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 28 February 2018

True love demands a long term commitment, otherwise, it has no worth. Thanks for sharing the sonnet, Dorothy.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 28 February 2018

Love is quick to come and go. Dorothy Parker's deep and intense poem portraying a stubborn heart seeking to give the wretched thing away.

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Nudershada Cabanes 28 February 2018

Love can be a burden when it is heavy on the heart from the wear and tear it goes through from loving every now and then.

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Seamus O Brian 28 February 2018

Was not overly moved by the first stanza, but the work comes into its own with the power of the imagery of the second stanza. Fascinating visual of the heart as a stone whose facets are cut by the experiences of life. The last few lines raise this piece into the realm of the memorable.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 February 2018

Touching inscription has been made. Beautiful poem.

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Paul Brookes 28 February 2018

Parker at her best worth the reading again and again Great write

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 February 2018

Such a great poem by Dorothy Parker👍👍👍

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Richard Wlodarski 28 February 2018

Such a burdened heart! Shared through such exquisite poetry!

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Muzahidul Reza 28 February 2018

Well portrait penned, nice to read, ........

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Kentucky Refugee 28 February 2008

What a powerful, sad poem.

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