Monday, May 7, 2007

*** A Portrait Of Erica... Comments

Rating: 3.0

Her black hair pulled back loosely,
flowing like a long shiny crimped mane,
with a few strands all about her withdrawn face.
My God, please take care of this teenager...
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Shelley L Baxter
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Geoff Warden 15 May 2007

Shelley.... The heartbeat of this work is uplifting in more ways than I can proclaim.... Deep in the stature of this work cries the heart of a spirit angelic.... keep up the likes of this and the world shalt be your oster.....

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Jerry Hughes 12 May 2007

This is like the photograph I saw of a five year old Jewish boy standing in line for execution at Dachau, and equally graphic....

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Melvina Germain 09 May 2007

Calling out to God, believing he will restore the mind and physical abilities is crucial. Call and praise his precious name, then watch the miracle unfold, he can do it and he will do it in his time, we must be patient. I love your poem Shelley, keep them coming. Excellent write---Melvina---

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David Harris 07 May 2007

Shelly, this is a beautiful poem and heart wrenching all at the same time. Very visual and has a wonderful flow. I'm sure God is watching over her every step along the way. Top Marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Shelley L Baxter

Shelley L Baxter

Calgary, Canada.
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