Thursday, May 22, 2014

A Portrait Of Beauty Comments

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A portrait of beauty is what he bought,
Not knowing what lay ahead.
He was captivated by the face and eyes
That he stared at from his bed.
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Edwina Reizer
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thabang krack menoe 23 January 2018

can ibe matter life that come went nite star can ibe hero that destroy world of lies please can be kill that sorro of pride

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Colleen Courtney 23 May 2014

Oh my! Another great story imparted in this wonderful piece! Such a talented writer of tales you are! I am truly enchanted by your poems! Thank you for sharing your gift with the world! ! !

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Kevin Patrick 22 May 2014

This was a wonderful narrative, I had to read it three times, you can almost make a script out of this and then film it as a movie. Both characters were searching for something and found it in one another. Great write.

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