Saturday, April 22, 2006

A Portrait Comments

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She stands, defiantly it seems,
her pelvic bones in true lordosis,
accentuating chiselled pectorals
fine rays of sunshine cling
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Scarlett Treat 22 April 2006

Earth Mother, full of joy of life...great description of a lovely lady.

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kskdnj sajn 22 April 2006

Excellent description of a portrait, very visual in and skillfully written. This is an amazing description Herbert, :) Sincerely, well done!

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Gina Onyemaechi 22 April 2006

Thank you Tai, thank you Mary...and love you, Herbsy. Gina.

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Mary Nagy 22 April 2006

What a wonderful poem for a wonderful lady.....I'm sure she will love it! Sincerely, Mary

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