Friday, October 14, 2016

A Porn Star Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was sleeping in the womb of a seed,
No lust, no desire, no feed, no greed,
I never knew what's going on outside,
A turnout as beauty, dreaming inside,
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Akhtar Jawad
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M Asim Nehal 15 October 2016

Every minute details covered and unleashed the true emotions, Nicely penned Janab...10++++

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Nosheen Irfan 15 October 2016

Very beautiful write. Insightful n profound. How deeply you go into a subject. A huge 10

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Valsa George 14 October 2016

'My poems are truly my immortal grace! ' Quite true! Akhtar ji lives through his poems..... We know you only through your lovely poems on myriad subjects! Let them fetch you immortality! (10)

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