I was sleeping in the womb of a seed,
No lust, no desire, no feed, no greed,
I never knew what's going on outside,
A turnout as beauty, dreaming inside,
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Very beautiful write. Insightful n profound. How deeply you go into a subject. A huge 10
'My poems are truly my immortal grace! ' Quite true! Akhtar ji lives through his poems..... We know you only through your lovely poems on myriad subjects! Let them fetch you immortality! (10)
Every minute details covered and unleashed the true emotions, Nicely penned Janab...10++++