A Poor Poet's Love Comments

very good poem but there's a slight spelling mistake you wrote smyle or something

a very sad story -thank you for sharing this well written poem

A commendable try... The sorrows and pain is almost palpable... keep it up! !

Poverty should not be the reason to perish! the idea, might have been conceived from the numerous real stories, but it is not attractive.

Painful story, but bravely said, poem is good.

Aww trapped soul caught in the weight of life. sad, true, GREAT!

lot of hurt and pain evident from your writing... keep up the good work! It would be a good idea to string them as a rhyming theme and increase the impact manyfold.

This is really QUITE nice.. I mean it, but isn't it just a bit harsh-themed one! ? I'll look forward to your inspiring ones! ; ') AJA!

good thought. nice poem.

Realistic and beautiful. great write!

And I thought he was going to get the girl - guess I'm just a naive romantic at heart! Keep it up mate!

Llke it, a sad but beautiful poem. A great write.

read the poem, I would say that there are basically two tyoes of writings, one which makes its way into the readers heart all on its own and the other which the readers makes a way into. I am a great fan of the former yet the latter attracts me less. This one of your according to me is of latter category. Its a beautiful for those whos some day experienced the pain of the character, but about the rest like me, what would it be? hope you dont mind the criticism. Thanks, and look forward to reading more of you.

Except for a few grammatical and spelling errors, the rest is very good. You have narrated it in a very beautiful manner. Keep up the good work :)

The storyline is gud...the theme and the concord is gud...a poem of luv unobserved...its sad and sober...gud write.

Good Write! ! ! sad yes! ! ! but must say very realistic! ! keep up the good work! !

Hello this is a beautifully sad write. You cover the politics of city life and gently lead through to love. There are a few typos (hope that you don't mind my honesty) Silver spoon(s) necklace(s) Spend/spent....smile and (he did not dare) I do hope you are ok with this and other than that a great write of good substance. Karen

Sad poem since his love for the girl was not returned. good writing!

a one-sided love affair..really sad ending Well done Sagar!

Wow amazing there are no other words for it