Saturday, June 26, 2010

A Poor Girl In A Poor Town Comments

Rating: 4.8

Everyday is the same in her home town,
She is just a poor girl in a poor town,
Always skipping school and barely skimming by,
It seems she has no ambitions,
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Paula Glynn
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An end-to-end pathetic description of the life of ‘a poor girl-in a -poor town'. Poetry of very standards. Exquisite.

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Chinedu Dike 26 May 2019

A well texted and nicely thought out poem, very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 21 November 2017

So emotional in her living. Very good in narration.

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Kim Barney 18 March 2015

Very sad. I would have liked to see the poem end on an upbeat note somehow, but it is well written, nevertheless.

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Rob Lamberton 22 June 2024

I agree it is sad! Unfortunately it's easy enough to become prisoners to our own thoughts.

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 June 2010

Because she has no place to go, For all places are the same, And will always be her prison. very pathetic description of a poor girl. i was just moved by your poem and sense of sympathy in me you could generate with your poem. lack of love can destroy a life. thank you for sharing. you really write from your heart. thank you again. God bless you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 June 2010

Because she has no place to go, For all places are the same, And will always be her prison. very pathetic description of a poor girl. i was just moved by your poem and sense of sympathy in me you could generate with your poem. lack of love can destroy a life. thank you for sharing. you really write from your heart. thank you again. God bless you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 June 2010

Because she has no place to go, For all places are the same, And will always be her prison. very pathetic description of a poor girl. i was just moved by your poem and sense of sympathy in me you could generate with your poem. lack of love can destroy a life. thank you for sharing. you really write from your heart. thank you again. God bless you.

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Paula Glynn

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