Everyday is the same in her home town,
She is just a poor girl in a poor town,
Always skipping school and barely skimming by,
It seems she has no ambitions,
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A well texted and nicely thought out poem, very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing.
Very sad. I would have liked to see the poem end on an upbeat note somehow, but it is well written, nevertheless.
I agree it is sad! Unfortunately it's easy enough to become prisoners to our own thoughts.
Because she has no place to go, For all places are the same, And will always be her prison. very pathetic description of a poor girl. i was just moved by your poem and sense of sympathy in me you could generate with your poem. lack of love can destroy a life. thank you for sharing. you really write from your heart. thank you again. God bless you.
Because she has no place to go, For all places are the same, And will always be her prison. very pathetic description of a poor girl. i was just moved by your poem and sense of sympathy in me you could generate with your poem. lack of love can destroy a life. thank you for sharing. you really write from your heart. thank you again. God bless you.
Because she has no place to go, For all places are the same, And will always be her prison. very pathetic description of a poor girl. i was just moved by your poem and sense of sympathy in me you could generate with your poem. lack of love can destroy a life. thank you for sharing. you really write from your heart. thank you again. God bless you.
An end-to-end pathetic description of the life of ‘a poor girl-in a -poor town'. Poetry of very standards. Exquisite.