Sunday, March 22, 2009

A Poor Boy's Bagatelle Comments

Rating: 5.0

My birthday heralds my first decade of life
The air I breathe clings frozen like an insulting knife,
Icing the inside of the old snow white window panes,
The bed bugs do not stir snug under the iron bed frames,
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Ken e Hall
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Tobias Caldicott 07 July 2009

Good Poem took some thought RGDS TOBIAS

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Ted Sheridan 03 April 2009

Great work here Mate. Especially like the 'clings frozen like an insulting knife....'

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 03 April 2009

Childhood memories are treasure for a poet. A mere bagatelle has turned into such a worthy poem. It is your artistry, Ken.

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Ken e Hall

Ken e Hall

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