! ! ! ! A Pomegranate And A Haiku! ! ! ! Comments

A pomegranate has so many fruits mysteriously hidden within..like your poem!

Write the same poem in haiku form...I know you can do it..! Cheers. Subroto

The comparison with a garnet is truly artistic! And the entire poem smacks of its juicy taste! Really great! 10! +++ I find that this fruit has been mentioned in the writings of many Arabic& Muslim poets. -Raj Nandy

a yummy poem... i hope i can taste a pomegranate... to write a splendid piece too... Pomegranate is regarded as Forbidden Fruit by Jewish Scholars a very interesting, entertaining, a wonderful poem in a haiku form Ma'am.. thanks for sharing...seems i also taste it by just reading this piece..smilessss 10+++++

Unique but eloquent simile for haiku. Yes its an art to get meaning and joy from a haiku. A luscious and tasteful poem, Mamta. Regards Naseer

Well described, an original refreshing piece, 10 Lynda xx