When life has laughed at my beliefs,
When sharp reproval makes me meek,
When worlds at large have taught me shame,
And work towards joy left me to blame.
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a nice theme of concept, well versed and rhymes except for the last stanza..
a suggestion..the last couplets will rhyme too..as it could be written as;
We're the ones who care
Don't feed us lies, don't dare.
the whole concept was good...keep on writing...
Ency Bearis
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a nice theme of concept, well versed and rhymes except for the last stanza.. a suggestion..the last couplets will rhyme too..as it could be written as; We're the ones who care Don't feed us lies, don't dare. the whole concept was good...keep on writing... Ency Bearis