Monday, May 28, 2018

A Poisoned Lance Pounced And Trounced Comments

Rating: 5.0

Surrender your burdens
To the feet of providence
When down and out in gardens
Sweeping seas of indigence
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Adrian Flett 27 June 2018

'To trigger bouts of doubts' The poem echoes with sounds that abound

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 June 2018

brilliant writings Title of this poem A Poisoned Lance Pounced And Trounced has composed brilliantly

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 27 June 2018

Such a fine poem, John...congrats for being chosen POD

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 June 2018

John, such a well crafted poem... congrats for being chosen....10+++++

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Britte Ninad 27 June 2018

Yeah right- there is no succor just rejection and poverty world collapsed at the rancor great 10+++

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The Peaceful One 27 June 2018

U are me and i u the fool that is now being hunted down eh! Feeling like u are hurt

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Robert Murray Smith 27 June 2018

Congratulations on being in this category. A fine worked write.++10

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John Sensele

John Sensele

Ndola, Zambia
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