Friday, December 2, 2005

A Pointless Poem For You Are Gone. Comments

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the cracks in your desert weathered face,
home to a thousand thoughts and memories,
from a time and a place,
long lost to the generals of time.
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John Tiong Chunghoo 01 January 2006

good poem vincent! ! ! !

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Uriah Hamilton 02 December 2005

We should value everyone but how much more an older person who has been there for us.

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A. B. 02 December 2005

Vincent, , , this is a reall cool poem man. Keep writing. Peace.

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