Tuesday, May 11, 2010

A Pointless Poem Comments

Rating: 4.5

all we see is a corrupt and evil world
all we see is our inner battles
our fights that we win
and the ones we lose
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Amrit Rathi 22 May 2010

A very brief but delivers with a bang the sad message[now you know how angels feel ]Great and powerful write.I gave 9/10. Thanks

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