A Pointless Death Comments

That was a great snapshot, which posed some interesting questions. As a Scot, I know what a beautiful view you must have had so the horror that followed packed even more of a punch. Hope to read more from you soon. Hugs Anna xxx

The dog sounds like a 'Springer' spaniel, who are dogs that retrieve the game birds when shot down. This would account for it going for the birds. I agree all dogs should be controlled but this was obviously so sudden that no one was to blame really. An accident. I have two cocker spaniels, they just put up the birds and don't retrieve. Nature is more powerful than anything, in so many ways, and animal instincts will always be there. A very well described piece of poetry and even though it was of a sad content, it was very well produced and constructed. Well done indeed, a great read. Love Ernestine XXX

Terry, this is a cool poem. You told the story well too. I hope we'll be reading more of your poems soon. Peace.

Narrative skills combined with an easy flow of words with a deep question to ponder. Susie.

I like your honesty when you say you had no position on what had occurred. Death always catches us unawares. A thought-provoking piece. I look forward to reading more of your poems. Warmly, Julia

The slightest event can turn into the largest emotion and challenging conundrum to solve. This is a great write.

Welcome ro PH! Great first poem. I could feel your sense of shock and horror; the poem conveys it well. Keep 'em coming. Pete