Saturday, August 25, 2007

A Point Of View Expressed Comments

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Mellowed in a way no one would guess...
That stress, conflicts and disappointments met.
And beating unflavorable odds,
To squash surmounting tests.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Dmitriy Kokarev 23 February 2008

Well after reading this i see what you saw in my work...we both are striving to show the world as it is...as it always has been...and saddly the way it will remain... I really like your style and your work in general seems extremely well thought of in sense of rhyme and rhythm... GREAT WORK...keep writing... Till then...

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Duncan Wyllie 27 August 2007

Sometimes when we are searching for answers we realise that they come at a cost, like our eyes being opened to something we may not have wanted to see, but yet we keep on searching, our tanacity to look forward, not holding on to the woes but feeling the change that draws us closer to a greater place, life goes on but we are changed and moved by its every action, we must keep up the evolution, keep moving to keep the lamp alight Thankyou for this Lawrence All good things your way Love duncan X

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 26 August 2007

Believe it OR not, I do have a sense of humor Theo. But you know the mind of the poet? Trying to find 'how' the colors of the rainbow are connected AND 'why' those particular colors? This too shall pass!

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Theodora Onken 25 August 2007

Bravo! What is an angel chart, Lawrence? Read your letter, and i have heard of sign charts, like i am a scorpio, but what is an angel chart anyway? Duh? Hey this is good, but you still sound down! Take Home Chef Theo

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Theodora Onken 25 August 2007

Bravo! What is an angel chart, Lawrence? Read your letter, and i have heard of sign charts, like i am a scorpio, but what is an angel chart anyway? Duh? Hey this is good, but you still sound down! Take Home Chef Theo

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