A Point Comments

To search for a point where you and I can meet.......lovely expression!

Very nicely written.Enjoyed reading Thanks for the drop

Beautiful poem! Only if the other person takes one step for the two steps taken and shows the willingness to move from the point of isolation, the journey can be pleasant.

10 +... words may fail to express what I felt after reading the poem. just wow

The journey of the poet in search of a point of meeting, the point of Nirvana being the nub of life has so touchingly been composed. Though I had tried in vain to touch you, now I need you to hold my hand and walk ahead. Beautiful...10

a wonderful poem on companionship. Full vote

''I will take two steps for your one But you have to move from your point of isolation.''- when we truly love, no sacrifice is great enough. I very much enjoy reading this poem.

Well focused. Well written......We are part of the bigger world with larger identity.........I will vote 10.

This is a very touching love poem. I like the line about needing to clear out an abscess of sorrow before love can grow. The desire to lead another to a higher plane of existence is beautiful. Thanks!

Savita there are two lines in a ghazal Yeh kiska intezar hay available on this web site - - Kutch hum barhen kutch aao tum, yeh fasley mitaen hum, Gale milen miten gile, yeh kiska intezar hay. A point in all the affairs of life exists whereat the distances are eliminated, but efforts are needed to locate that point.

heart touching..! ! nice..! ! !