Wednesday, December 24, 2008

A Point Comments

Rating: 2.8

Words too many, creates an inflation-like balloon; sphere grown too large
where each word gets lost in the volume of words gone awry, orphaned,
where syllabicity becomes too complicatedly and comprehension
escapes the brain and flees into the night of obscurity and sadly
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Lonnie Hicks
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ata khan 08 February 2009

You have made your point very nicely with style. Meaningful.10/10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 03 January 2009

A Point has many critical points within it for readers, for poets and for critics.

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there is usually a hidden meaning behind a poem which can be revealed one way or another, yours is revealed in the style of writing down the page, i like it, makes it interesting and opens the mind, a figurative point proven by a literal point very nice :)

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