One word falls as another rises
to the surface of my mind,
together they create the start
of what life means to me.
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perfect poem! ! ! ! you describe a poet(or poetess) perfectly
A LOVELY & A WARM TRIBUTE TO A POET'S LIFE AND HIS POETRY! 10+ -Raj Nandy
this is a gem of a poem, about the poets life! written with a lot of feelings and maturity.great poem bob!
very well written...it is a flowing river within us creativity..we share to grow
each poem is a picture on the canvas of the mind a very thought provoking poem Bob 10+++
creativity is like meditation and its the process as well as the outcome which lifts a poem above ordinary. a poet's eye misses nothing, in the same moment one can feel several emotions. its a gift to raise mundane to sublime. very lovely poem
Bob, this personal exploration into the spiritual trigger of creation is most impressive. I particularly like the following: 'One word falls as another rises to the surface of my mind'; 'a well of metaphors'; life's unspoken library'; and 'jumbled and cramped into cupboards and drawers'. Another fine poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
From your library, words begin to flow on cue, like magic and I am enthralled - when I think of words 'falling off the mind' and suddenly see beauty created then blessed we are to be able to share and read these works of wonder - you are a true poet Bob
Writing poetry is a creative adventure. One that never grows old. Praise for a fine wordsmith.10, of course. As always, Sandra
Loved it Bob - the opportunity given to a poet is very special - - you make full use of this gift Bob with your own unique talent.... thanks and a more than ten from Fay...
Poet's life is inspiring, natural and lovely and his poems inspire others at all times! Nice to read!
well.. i know this feeling sir.. expressing ourselves through beautiful words always help to ease out our mind.. nice write indeed. you said it well.. but in most cases it's easier said than done when it comes to facing life.... with love shan
Written as only a Welshman could, stirring stuff Bob, Loved it 10 Lynda xx
Bob, really thought this was so well written. Thought the last stanza to be a bit special.10/10 Ian
Wonderful start that enthralled me till the end Perfect illustration to what a good writer can. This sect, so less understood by the main stream Sometimes even less read by fellow beings To be with oneself, write to the hearts conetnt keep the boat on sail.. watch.. and bliss or buzz... Hummm dear poet... great work here. You reminded all of us to know whats within us... what we are all up to... But your is class.. different here... an imprint..