Wednesday, January 11, 2006

A Poetic Mind Wants To Know Comments

Rating: 4.8

My poetic mind wants to know
Do you feel for me like I feel for you?
My desire for you trickles slowly to my cervical vertebrae
Heart pumps rapidly at the sound of your voice
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***** ********* 13 January 2006

You have a rich vocabulary cam lam and your use of metaphor is quite astounding. The journey you describe is one I fear to tread, but that is because I'm an old fashioned girl and not used to the modern world, but I suppose we have to take the journey, to understand what love is really all about. And your final question is one, we would like an affirmative answer too, hopefully, before we reach the end of the journey. Great Work. I rated this way before I commented by the way. 10 from Tai

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Peter Lebuhn 11 January 2006

Face Butter You Knooooooooooow I feel for you like you do for me Let your Poetic Mind wonder No more Cat Lam Peter

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Peter Lebuhn 11 January 2006

Face Butter You Knooooooooooow I feel for you like you do for me Let your Poetic Mind wonder No more Cat Lam Peter

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***** ********* 11 January 2006

Hi Face Butter! Your poem speaks a question that all lovers require an answer to. I think really, we should know, deep down anyway, but affirmation, does the soul wonders imo. I like the poem, but found it a little long. 9 from smiling Tai

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