Friday, September 18, 2020

A Poetic Illusion Comments

Rating: 5.0

Two heads on one pillow of time
Floating on musk fragrance
Under starry sky of eternity
Where the moon of tomorrow
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M. Asim Nehal
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Nosheen Irfan 20 September 2020

A deft use of words and feelings. That's classy writing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 September 2020

A beautiful philosophical poem is well executed having metaphor. I appreciate this poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Ricky Manhatten 19 September 2020

A great poetic illusion nice work. Liked it MAN

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Kostas Lagos 19 September 2020

A fabulous poem my friend!

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T Rajan Evol 18 September 2020

Awesome Our body floating against the gravity Ploughing the fortunes from the tree of fate Bouquet of colourful dreams Fleeting the streets of relaxation In the dreamy vision of a poet To meet the pen of memories.

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S H 18 September 2020

Excellent poem i liked the opening verse Two heads on one pillow of time Floating on musk fragrance Under starry sky of eternity Where the moon of tomorrow Sails on the waves of wishes.

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Deepak S S 18 September 2020

Superb poetic illusion nicely composed.

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Darren Jkoeryo 18 September 2020

Brilliant expression: Bouquet of colourful dreams Fleeting the streets of relaxation In the dreamy vision of a poet To meet the pen of memories.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 18 September 2020

Bouquet of colourful dreams Fleeting the streets of relaxation..................... a total poem playing with the harmony of sounds and unsounded layer of life. Enjoyed the writing. Thank you very much.

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Michael Jack 18 September 2020

Excellent poem with rich vocab and fantastic imagery

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Zuzu Mutairi 18 September 2020

I don't know how to write comment for this wonderful poem. The poetic language is absolute joy to read, The pen of a memory is something to enjoy This poem I shall read again and again.

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Sharad Bhatia 18 September 2020

Yes, we always see dreams as a illusion. 100++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 September 2020

Bouquet of colourful dreams Fleeting the streets of relaxation In the dreamy vision of a poet To meet the pen of memories.......nice poetic expression. A beautiful poem is amazingly delineated. Thanks. Five stars.

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 September 2020

Poet and poetic existence Poetry and penning lenses Everywhere seek the wisdom To make all free from the dirw doom But dellusional dimensions Live in its imaginative norms

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