Friday, November 23, 2018

A Poetic Friendship Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have read all the poems of my friend
I have seen my friend from the unseen skies
To see her more and more what else I could intend
I put myself into her shoes, to see things through her eyes.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 November 2018

you have also read many of mine and a few well known Indian poets and ah we happen to be males mistake not not females in garbs of males

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 November 2018

Akhtar, such a lovely poem...................10+++++++++++++++++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2018

Finding something in her shoes she picks me up in her heart And I read her heart where there are thoughts That is yet to be painted in a work of art Just rains she needs in the casual droughts......so touching and impressive. You have to do something yet. A beautiful poem on poetess having amusing expression is amazingly shared.

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Khalida Bano Ali 23 November 2018

A wonderful poem, loved it as I see I am one the poetesses whose all poems are read by Akhtar Jawad.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 November 2018

Rains may or may not fall, who knows? /But here I am to melt my heart from my thirsty eyes/The miracle of friendship, the pinkish white canvas shows/The poem not yet written..teaching expression! A marvelous poem in the chapter of friendship! We get love and invaluable resources from invisible friends! Beautifully presented!

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