How I yearn to write in free verse,
Free from rhythm, cadence and
Free to roam about ethereally
In some never-never land.
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Rhyming is a strightjacket. Free verse is prozac. I use both. Great write.
when I take my pen in hand To write new poetry, It still comes out in rhythmic form. it happens with me too.
.I must write of sad yesterdays and hope-filled tomorrows and tell of my misty dreams and future schemes. Great write, I could not stop to wonder: Do one who feels deep urge to write from the inside really care for success or what will become? The rhythmic form to come natural in a flow, wow, some would give anything to have such a formidable task. Loved the read, thank you for share.
Can't believe you've gotten considerable critism on this beautiful work. Good job Joseph, you've reached your desire. Would you please read my piece, titled Ode to the Poet? Thank you.
joe you are an emense talent. I have read your stuff and it all is wonderful. keep doing what you do and weaving the magic that you weave.
If rhyming is your forte, then that`s okay Joseph - there are some who believe that prose is not true poetry. Not a personal opinion I might add. Well penned piece, barring rhyme.
I kow what you mean, my poems insist on rhyming, but you have really shone with this one, so descriptive, a real pleasure to read and not a rhyme in sight, Wonderful.
All the poets of lore would be very proud of all that you write, in any fashion you so choose, for your words are all so wonderful.