What's keepng me
From writing better poetry
(Beyond not finding a word
That rhymes with orange)
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TOM, YOU NEVER FAIL TO AMAZE. YOU PAINT A BEAUTIFUL EXPLORATORY EMOTIONAL PICTURE. YOUR WORDS FLOW AND CAPTURE IMAGES. NICE. THIS POEM BELIES YOUR SELF-EXAMINATION. JOB WELL DONE.
Tom It's hard to know when to stop tweaking isn't it? I think you can put the pen down on this one!
Poetry can have a life.....all its own....completely....from start....to finish! And...the narrator.......wonders......