Sunday, March 18, 2007

A Poet's Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sway in the gentle breeze
of Your life giving breath
with supple branches in the wind,
and shade all that come within my scope
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David Taylor
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BEAU GOLDEN 18 December 2007

I think what Marci Made meant to say, 'Joyce Kilmer, eat your heart out'! I have added this to my favorites as well.

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Malini Kadir 13 April 2007

wow! I could for ever under its branches...remain....breathing in its fragrance!

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Marci Made 26 March 2007

Your words are a wondrous thing. someone wrote 'I think that I will never see, a poem as lovely as a tree..' You give us the 'tree of words' in your writes. Don't stop.........marci. :) xo

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Declan McHenry 18 March 2007

A rich and vivid piece David. Finely delivered.

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David Harris 18 March 2007

David, what can I say, except that I loved it. Big 10 from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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poetry lover 18 March 2007

I love this one great write.

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David Taylor

David Taylor

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